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Last Key Frame

For my last key frame I will draw the attention away from a fight scene, which would be hard make realistic and most likely too gruesome. Therefore instead I will have a shot of a blood splatter on significant objects, like a toy or family photo. This will insinuate that there has been a murder but doesn't show any gruesome details.

NEW Script Draft

Feedback for Broken Soul Script

I got feedback on my script for my short film Broken Soul. I was asked by Mr Barton to cut down on the description for the scenes in my short film. I was also asked to change a location in one scene. 

Animation Storyboard

9 Key Frames for Broken Soul

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Visual

This is the first storyboard for my film sequence Broken Soul. It includes elements from the different ideas that I have gathered for it, such as the props, characters, lighting and editing.

Characters

DAN 

Dan is a golf teacher with his membership jumper and shirt combo with loose black golfing trousers, right down to his new golfing shoes. With money in his eyes, he tries his best to help his students but as his job loses importance he loses interest too.

JAMES

Dressed in his favourite polo shirt and golfing trousers, James brings along his golfing clubs to his local golfing centre. He’s tall and lanky, with hair covering his face. He walks with his back hunched slightly and his head to the ground.

ELIZABETH GREEN (MOTHER)

Elizabeth Green, is dressed in a pastel jumper and trousers, with her favourite pearl necklace and headband. She has a maternal look about her and her groomed hair has become messy and grubby.

JOHN GREEN (FATHER)

With a stern look on his face and gritted teeth, John Green has worked hard for his possessions. He wears his designer clothes proudly and checks to straighten up his tie. His shoes are off and his colorful socks are revealed. Only a few strands of messy hair have escaped from his smooth exterior. Normally he oozes allure, but now, slumped against the cold basement wall, he looks fragile and pale.

Locations

FIRST LOCATION - GOLF CLUB

SECOND LOCATION - MY HOUSE (Living Room + Kitchen + Basement)

First Script Draft

Script Outline

SCENE DESCRIPTION

Starts with the boy cutting open a grapefruit, slowly. He juices the grapefruit, with the juice representing blood and the skin representing human skin. He transfers the juice into a glass, adds sugar then takes a sip. 

He opens the door to the basement and walks down the stairs, slowly. We hear muffles of sounds and screaming through taped mouths. 

The parents are revealed and their muffled screams gets louder. He stands over them and takes another sip from his drink. He peels away their masking tape from their mouth.

DIALOGUE

DAD: You sick bastard!

MOTHER: What are you gonna do with us?

The boy takes another sip from his drink

DAD: Say something!

The boy spits out the drink.

MOTHER: Why are you doing this?

BOY: Why not?

The father kicks his legs out in fury.

FATHER: Look son, lets talk about this, whatever you're going through, we'll understand.

BOY: You'll never understand! I'm not your son!

FLASHBACK STARTS AND ENDS

The boy holds his head. The parents start talking to him, trying to give positive thoughts. But their voices are muffled.

MOTHER: Everything will be fine, just let us go and we won't say anything more about this.

FATHER: Listen to your mother, listen to us, you need help, we'll get you some, we'll get you some help.

The boy tries to block out the noise, he sways and starts to wave his arms around, creating a mess of destruction. He punches the father and the mother screams.

MOTHER: NO! Stop it!

The boy leans over the parents with a knife. A camera shot shows the door closing and the scene unfolds in the distance.

Film Pitch

Pitch for Broken Soul

When a troubled young boy is adopted by a suburban couple, he struggles to adapt to his new life and finds that his past still haunts. In order to cope with his past he takes his anger out on them but becomes more and more violent. Will they be able to escape from him or will he continue to torture them?

The film will be set outside London where he kidnaps and tortures his adoptive parents. the film will appeal to viewers aged between 18 and 30. It is a psychological thriller based on the film We Need To Talk About Kevin and has aspects of the film Juno. The setup will begin with a brief backstory of the boy and the adoptive parents then the confrontation would be when the now older boy has a flashback of his past that haunts him and causes him to kidnap and torture his adoptive parents in their basement. The resolution is not clear as we do not know whether he kills them or leaves them in the basement.